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Posted 6/15/2008 10:12:09 PM






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I just came up with this-what do you think-I got the girls bracelets and earrings.

I wanted to design something special for you;

Swarovski crystals in clear and blue.

To be worn on your ears and wrist;

adorning comments will persist.

You’re sparkling personality,

is what inspired me;

to choose gems as precious as you;

to symbolize our friendship,  that is lasting and true.

 

 

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Posted 6/16/2008 12:56:55 AM






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That is very cute! I like it a lot! Good job!

 

 

...Proud Momma of Charlotte...

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Posted 6/18/2008 8:11:05 PM


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cristinaf (6/15/2008)
I just came up with this-what do you think-I got the girls bracelets and earrings.

I wanted to design something special for you;

Swarovski crystals in clear and blue.

To be worn on your ears and wrist;

adorning comments will persist.

You’re sparkling personality,

is what inspired me;

to choose gems as precious as you;

to symbolize our friendship,  that is lasting and true.

 

 

I like it a lot   Well done!

 

Can I just make two tiny suggestions?  Not criticisms in any way, just trying to help out   (Feel free to ignore!)

 

I suspect you mean to say "adoring" comments?

 

Also, it's "your" sparkling personality

 

That's all!  Other than that, it's great!  Very personalized and thoughtful

~Sarah and Rob~

Getting married in Ottawa... sometime in 2010...

 

When you meet someone who can cook and do housework,

don't hesitate a minute - marry him!

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Posted 6/18/2008 11:55:09 PM






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sarahandrob09 (6/18/2008)
cristinaf (6/15/2008)
I just came up with this-what do you think-I got the girls bracelets and earrings.

I wanted to design something special for you;

Swarovski crystals in clear and blue.

To be worn on your ears and wrist;

adorning comments will persist.

You’re sparkling personality,

is what inspired me;

to choose gems as precious as you;

to symbolize our friendship,  that is lasting and true.

 

 

I like it a lot   Well done!

 

Can I just make two tiny suggestions?  Not criticisms in any way, just trying to help out   (Feel free to ignore!)

 

I suspect you mean to say "adoring" comments?

 

Also, it's "your" sparkling personality

 

That's all!  Other than that, it's great!  Very personalized and thoughtful

 

Thanks so much, unfortunately I just gave it to them and none of them caught that.

 

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Posted 6/19/2008 12:23:30 PM


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If none of them noticed, then it's all good

How'd they like the gifts and poem?

~Sarah and Rob~

Getting married in Ottawa... sometime in 2010...

 

When you meet someone who can cook and do housework,

don't hesitate a minute - marry him!

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